Our trip to Spencer park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

Our trip to Spencer Park On Friday we went to Spencer park. I was in the bus with Lyan and we played games. When we got there I saw my old school (South Hornby) the teachers gave us a number mine was 3D first we played in the playground. I saw all my friends Sandra, Mikayla, Ayla, Nikki and all my others. Then my group went on a quick walk to a lookout to see a beautiful sight of a lagoon.then we had a snack. After the snack we went to a bird look out we saw a big bird it had long legs to stand in the swamp and if it did not have long legs it would sink in the swamp. So we went on and then we went back to the playground and they called our names to get a bit of fruit. The fruit that I got was an apple after when we all finished our fruit. We got back on the bus and went back to school. I was so tired I fell asleep on the couch