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Tuesday, 18 September 2018

My Storys Start

Lately I have been doing Topic sentences and what is a paragraph. I have already done my first paragraph, What I did is I tried to make it sound interesting and not boring so people like it and think its interesting, I also I'm going to show you my first one hope you like it and feel free to leave a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment and feedback. Bye :D.




Last night I had the worst dream of my life. My tummy had a huge knot.
What I can remember about my dream is that it was really dark in town. No one was around it was kinda foggy too. Then I heard a loud thud behind me and there it was the biggest hairiest monster I had ever seen, limping towards me. mumbling my name then that's when I had this feeling that I should run away from the big beast.

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  1. Sophia19 September 2018 at 09:45

    Hi Rhyleigh this is Sophia I really like your topic sentence and how you described how the monster was coming to you and I really like you paragraph.

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